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Reluctantly we danced, gangly arms outstretched.

Crumpled wrappers strewn, still no satisfaction.

Bubble yum grapple impedes my grace.

Snowflake flinch, his first winter wonder.

It's when she smiles, I know.

Her "Hello" tells me I'm in.

Her legs opened and I hesitated.

Oh! Uhnh! Wait! I've!...failed you.

Roasted flesh, once a bewitching beauty.

New territory, swingin' with the in-laws.

Death row cookout... Smell the justice.

Many splendid lives were only dreamed.

Entered By Ray From Austin
2006-11-06 21:33:11

I liked these. A lot.

Entered By Rik From Unknown
2006-11-08 21:32:39

Me too. I think some of those would make some really great movie tag lines, too. Especially the one about roasted flesh. You may have a new calling in life, Jesse.

Entered By Addie From Milwaukee
2006-11-11 07:04:10

It was too fun when Jesse was throwing all those ideas around the other day. I couldn't resist. Internet voyeur, task at hand...Mom?!??!

Entered By Ray From Austin
2006-11-14 02:25:27

And you said you weren't a writer...

Entered By Jesse From Waukesha
2006-11-14 17:56:29

Thank you. Rik, I thought about working in advertising once; I even had an interview - but when it came down to it, I just couldn't rape that baby seal to death. Cause that's what advertisers do, is rape and kill baby seals. It's too bad though, I think I would've been good at the rest of the job.
...drink coke.

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